Kia Ora Sapphire, I am Indi from Karoro School. I really like your reading work because it is very colourful. The teamwork paragraph made me think of when I was younger and I was singing a song with my cousins called Teamwork. Have you thought about your punctuation? Next time maybe you could check if all your spelling is correct.
Kia Ora Sapphire, I am Breanna from Karoro School I think your background is so cool. The part about the ballerina made me think about when I did dancing. Maybe next time you could put in some more punctuation.
Kia Ora Sapphire, I am Indi from Karoro School. I really like your reading work because it is very colourful. The teamwork paragraph made me think of when I was younger and I was singing a song with my cousins called Teamwork. Have you thought about your punctuation? Next time maybe you could check if all your spelling is correct.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Sapphire, I am Breanna from Karoro School I think your background is so cool. The part about the ballerina made me think about when I did dancing. Maybe next time you could put in some more punctuation.
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