Wow Sapphire that is really good. I think people should clean after them selves so all the animals can live. Maybe next time you should write more about the good side of the beach.
Kia Ora Sapphire. I agree that people should pick up their rubbish so the animals can enjoy life too. When my class went to the rocky shore we found a lot of rubbish as well. I think you should add some more language features next time. Ka Pai!
Good Work Sapphire, I really enjoyed how you said where the waves crash like two cars colliding together. I agree that there should not be litter on the seashore. From Summer
Wow Sapphire that is really good. I think people should clean after them selves so all the animals can live. Maybe next time you should write more about the good side of the beach.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Sapphire. I agree that people should pick up their rubbish so the animals can enjoy life too. When my class went to the rocky shore we found a lot of rubbish as well. I think you should add some more language features next time. Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteGood Work Sapphire, I really enjoyed how you said where the waves crash like two cars colliding together. I agree that there should not be litter on the seashore.
ReplyDeleteFrom Summer